I’ve seen too many
Tripped up too many times, true
So today I fly
Basking in the sun
Blinded by mysteries hue
Dazed, confused, tranquil
Missing in action
From assembly line playgrounds
Still jumping from swings
Saw two stars last night
Playing games, watching TV
My son’s, my gifts, love
I think in riddles
I speak in hieroglyphics
I am alien
These haikus are great!
ReplyDeleteI particularly like the following lines:
"So today I fly" - finding another method of transportation.
"Assembly line playgrounds/ Still jumping from swings"
"Saw two stars last night" - as a reference to your beautiful sons.
And I love the whole last haiku. Very cool. And true. Speaking in hieroglyphics is quite an interesting image.
I like the last haiku best. It's great. I also like "assembly line playgrounds" - what an idea!
ReplyDeleteKeep writing, Marcus!
My blog is finally off the ground and I intend to keep writing on it. Check it out from time to time.